ENGL 4530 Adv. Writing for Business and Industry

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Five Audiences and How to Write for Them . . .

Based on early work about audience analysis by Kenneth Houp and Thomas Pearsall.

General

Readers outside of their particular field of specialization.

Audience Characteristics

  • Read for enjoyment and non-specialized information.
  • Often interested in science and technology.
  • High school education and perhaps a B.A. or B.S.
  • No training or little prior knowledge of the topic.
  • More interested in "what" than "why."
  • Not a "captive" audience.

Writer's Strategies

  • Content: Topics that relate to their daily lives; ample background, usually in summary form rather than detail; practical information rather than theory; extended definitions; anecdotes and other human interest information.
  • Organization: Narrative, chronological, least complex to most complex, most interesting to least interesting, general to specific.
  • Style/Tone: Informal, readable; plain language—few technical terms and no jargon; active voice; analogies; shorter sentences and paragraphs; generally, 3rd to 9th-grade reading level; verbal explanations of data (rather than formulae and equations).
  • Layout: Lots of white space, color, other eye-catching graphics.
  • Illustration: Simple charts, maps, bar graphs, photos.

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Manager or Executive

Readers responsible for decisions regarding personnel, production, or profits.

Audience Characteristics

  • Interested in effects and costs rather than in theory or mechanical applications.
  • Need quick access to information because of limited decision-making time.
  • B.A. or B.S., not necessarily in technical or scientific field.
  • Broad knowledge of the field, but not actively involved in technical work.
  • Frequently trained in a technical or specialized field.

Writer's Strategies

  • Content: Simple and concise background information; recommendations, criteria, discussion of alternatives; statistics on costs, personnel, facilities, markets, possible competition; non-essential data and information in an appendix.
  • Organization: Important information (conclusions and recommendations, summaries) at the beginning.
  • Style/Tone: Formal but not stuffy; readable; plain language—technical terms and jargon clearly explained; active voice; verbal explanations of data (rather than formulae and equations); shorter sentences and paragraphs than for expert; overall, similar to general audience, but perhaps a little higher level.
  • Layout: Pie charts, bar graphs, simple line graphs, tables.
  • Illustration: Headings, white space for easy access

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Expert

Readers trained in theory, and probably application, in field of specialization.

Audience Characteristics

  • Looking for new information or techniques.
  • Evaluating the information.
  • B.S. and/or experience; may have graduate work.
  • Captive reader.

Writer's Strategies

  • Content: Both theory and practical applications of theory; detailed background information; statement of objectives, scope, limitations; research methods outlined in sufficient detail for replication; conclusions drawn from data; references to previous experimentation, research, or publications in the field.
  • Organization: Conclusions and recommendations are at the end—specific to general (or general to specific to general); typical scientific report form.
  • Style/Tone: Formal, objective; standard terms, abbreviations, formulae may be used; non-standard usage should be identified and explained; active or passive voice; highly technical mathematics, formulae, equations may be used—verbal explanations may accompany them, but they, too, may be highly technical; longer and more complex sentences and longer paragraphs.
  • Layout: Tables, line graphs, complex charts, photos.
  • Illustration: Headings, but not as much white space.

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Technician

Readers trained to build and maintain specialized equipment. 

Audience Characteristics

  • Interested more in "how" equipment works than in theoretical experimentation or explanation.
  • High school education; perhaps B.S.
  • Less theoretical training than expert, but possibly more applied experience and/or training.

Writer's Strategies

  • Content: Only enough theoretical information to give some background and to help with trouble shooting; often general description of equipment, parts, operation principles, maintenance; emphasis on detail, but less than for expert.
  • Organization: Sequential or chronological.
  • Style/Tone Active voice; standard terms and abbreviations may be used, although some definitions may be necessary; formulae and equations should be limited; verbal explanations should always accompany them; short sentences and paragraphs.
  • Layout: Charts, graphs, and photographs are detailed, but not as complex as for expert.
  • Illustration: Carefully-labeled drawings; lots of headings, white space, numbered steps, color, graphic techniques (boxes, lines).

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Operator

Readers responsible for actual operation of equipment. 

Audience Characteristics

  • Interested more in "how" equipment works than in theoretical experimentation or explanation.
  • High school education or less.

Writer's Strategies

  • Content: Very general background only; emphasis on mechanical operation; detailed operating instructions.
  • Organization: Sequential or chronological.
  • Style/Tone: Active voice and imperative mood; all terms should be fully explained; no formulae and equations; short sentences and paragraphs.
  • Layout: Illustrations, photos, blow-up diagrams.
  • Illustration: Tables, charts, and graphs should be used only when necessary for operation; graphic techniques (bold, lines, boxes) to set off notes, cautions, and warnings; lots of white space; carefully-labeled drawings; lots of headings, white space, numbered steps, color, graphic techniques (boxes, lines).

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