ENGL 4530 Adv. Writing for Business and Industry

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  Levels of Edit

Typically, you have probably thought of editing as checking spelling, evaluating basic grammar (subject-verb agreement, pronoun reference, etc.), and proofreading for consistency. While these practices represent important parts of the editing process, one should also consider a rich variety of other evaluation techniques. Some of these techniques provide methods to control the management and production of information events; others refine the basic evaluation process.

Editing Typology might be categorized as:

Edit Type

Purpose

Coordination

Defining an information domain and managing its production

Policy

Creating consistent elements in an information domain.

Integrity

Creating consistent elements in an information domain.

Screening

Editing specific language elements

Clarification

Editing specific language elements

Format

Assessing essential global and local features

Mechanics

Evaluating words, symbols, references, and non-textual features

Language

Checking spelling, evaluating cohesion and grammatical structures

Substantive

Evaluating global and local features, including non-textual elements

 

As you review the Editing Typology website (listed below), you should pay particular attention to the last four types, especially those aspects of each type that you have not typically used in your own evaluations.

For example, writers often ask for advice about including non-textual elements. Should such information appear close to its textual referent or in an appendix? Another question might be, simply, will a non-textual element add anything to the usefulness of the text? I'd suggest that the latter is a far more important question.

Topical Persistence

Similarly, one might want to decide if an author has successfully maintained a focus on a particular topic, or aspect of a topic.

I call this "persistence of topic," others call it, formally in linguistic terms, "cohesion." Regardless of the term we use, the idea is to try to account for how well an authoring agent maintains focus on her/his intention in the entire information domain (the global level) and in any of its constituent parts (local level).

This technique should NOT be confused with outlining, which helps an author PLAN a text; instead, it offers a method that an authoring agency can use to determine why an existing document, or information domain, has failed to achieve its goals.  Based on this analysis, companies often change their documentation practices.

Here's an example of how to evaluate persistence of topic.

 Additional Resources

Editing Typology

A Second Topical Persistence Example

A "More-Than-You-Wanted-To-Know" Discussion of Editing